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Annotation The Alloy of Law Chapter Seven


Here is the first batch of annotations for The Alloy of Law. As with all of the other annotations here on the site, each annotation contains spoilers for the current chapter. Spoilers for chapters after the current one are hidden by spoiler tags. We recommend you read the book before reading the annotations! Also, please note that there are not yet annotations for the prologue or first chapter.

Marasi finds Waxillium experimenting with metals

I was very amused to find that the cover of this book had been steampunkified a little bit, with Waxillium having a pair of extraneous goggles on his head. But, to be fair, I did put some goggles in the book, so I guess I can’t complain too much.

One thing I was aware of when writing this book was that I didn’t want it to feel too much like Sherlock Holmes. There are a lot of paralells, as I mentioned in an earlier annotation. It was important to me to acknowledge the obvious influence to myself, but try to keep myself from falling too much into the same mold.

That’s kind of hard when the story is set up, basically, to be a mystery with an invesigator set in a similar time period to the Holmes stories. In my head, however, I decided this book would be more police procedural and less quirky-genius-does-deduction. I wanted Waxillium to be a cop, through and through, not an eccentric who solves cases out of curiosity. In that regard, Sam Vimes—from Terry Pratchett’s books—was almost as much of an inspiration as Holmes was.

Anyway, that’s all a side note to what is happening in this chapter. Waxillium is being methodical in the way he tracks down what is happening. He’s very much a step-by-step kind of guy in these matters. And now that he’s let himself loose and decided to be involved, he’s gone a little overboard.


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