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Annotation Mistborn Chapter Twenty-Nine


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Chapter Twenty-Nine (Includes hidden spoilers.)

This is probably my favorite section from the logbook. It really comes together here, weaving in elements from the various epigraphs, making a story out of what the reader has previously only seen in pieces.

I hope this story-within-a-story is interesting to you. It really does have a purpose in the novel, as you’ll eventually see. At the very least, I should hope that the concept intrigues you. The past story is, after all, the standard fantasy novel story–the young peasant hero who follows the prophesies to rise up and defeat the dark lord. Except, as you can guess, something went wrong.

Though I try to avoid writing the standard fantasy story, it intrigues me. That’s why I wanted to have these epigraphs make reference to the concept. They let me play with what has come before me, without actually forcing my readers to spend all their time reading ‘my’ interpretation of the same old story. (It seems that every fantasy author has their own spin on this story–yet none of them realize that as a reader, I don’t really want to read a new spin on an old story. I want to read a new story.)


Vin’s “Everything is going to change” discussion strikes me as one of the most sincere, and honest things discussed in the book. I like this chapter for the way that it exposes the main characters. I know I’ve felt like Vin sometimes, and I know lots of people who fear change because of that phantom feeling that the future can’t possibly be as good as the present.

It’s no coincidence that I spend a lot of time on Sazed’s religions in this chapter. I liked the interplay of the religions of the past with the pensiveness for the future both Vin and Kelsier are feeling.



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