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Annotation Mistborn Chapter Thirty-Four Part Two


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Chapter Thirty-Four Part Two

Kelsier saving Elend in this chapter was indeed something of a homage to LES MISERABLES. It is one of my favorite classics, and Elend’s own character—with his group of idealistic noble friends—was partially inspired by Marius and his cohorts. I wasn’t originally going to have Elend in this scene, but I decided to throw him in and give Kelsier the opportunity to save him, partially as an inside reference to the story that inspired him, and partially to let Kelsier do something truly selfless as a final send-off before he died.


I put the Lord Ruler in black and white—rather than just black, as I’d originally planned—to give metaphoric reference to his belief that he is God. He’s both black and white—he encompasses all, and controls all. Of course, he’s faking. In the mythology of this world, there are two forces—Ruin and Preservation—and he really only touched one of the two powers. But, then, we’ll have more on that in later books.


You know, I always talk about how I like happy endings. And yet, everyone always complains that I’m too brutal in places. Here is a good example.

Kelsier dies. Yes, he’s really dead. Yet, his death isn’t truly that sad to me. He accomplished a lot, and died facing down the Lord Ruler himself. It’s not a sad death.

Honestly, you should have seen it coming. I worried about doing this, actually, since it seemed a little too expected. The mentor figure always ends up getting killed. I nearly didn’t do it simply for that reason. However, I eventually decided that a good story is more important, sometimes, than avoiding the expected. Once in a while, you just have to do what feels right, even if that feeling leads you into areas that others have tread. Hopefully, I take it in my own direction. (See the next chapter.)


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