Current Projects
Skyward final proofread
100 %
Legion: The Many Lives of Stephen Leeds final proofread
100 %
Secret Project second draft
100 %
Skyward 2 second draft
100 %

Annotation Mistborn Chapter Ten Part one


The following is an author’s annotation that relates to a specific chapter of the book MISTBORN: THE FINAL EMPIRE. Note that the following is NOT the text of the actual chapter, but a companion to the chapter, revealing “behind the scenes” information. If you have not read the book up to–and including–this chapter, you risk serious spoilers! Please, if you haven’t read MISTBORN, go visit the sample chapters, or perhaps purchase the book via Amazon.

You can navigate between annotations by using the list of links on the left. The very first annotation has a more detailed explanation of what is going on. If you want to start there, go to this link. Note–thoughts in the following annotation that might spoil later chapters have been hidden. You can reveal them via the button on the left, and they will appear in red. Not all chapters have hidden text–in fact, relatively few of them do. Thanks!


Chapter Ten

This chapter has my favorite of Ham’s little philosophical dilemmas. Most people I’ve had read the book don’t think much of this argument. It seems obvious to them that resisting the Lord Ruler is the right thing for the people to do. I guess that means I’ve done my work well, giving the readers a distinct hatred of this government.

And yet, I don’t think the answer is that simple–not for the people living in the world. Ham has a point, in my opinion. Not a big one, but at least one worth considering.


In the original draft of the book, Kelsier didn’t show up at this meeting. He let Yeden do the recruiting. However, as the drafting proceeded, I decided that I wanted Kelsier to present himself more fully to the skaa population. With Yeden now acting as their employer–rather than just another member of the crew–I also needed to show what Kelsier could do that Yeden could not.


|   Castellano