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Annotation Mistborn Chapter Nine


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Chapter Nine

One odd thing I’ve heard—and noticed—about new writers as opposed to more experienced writers is that the more experienced ones tend to make their books last longer. Many first books take place in a matter of days, or perhaps weeks. Yet, books by more accomplished writers tend to span months or years.

It might just be coincidence relating to books I’ve read. I mean, there doesn’t seem to be any reason it would be true. Yet, it certainly holds for myself. My first books happened very quickly—even ELANTRIS, which was my sixth, happened in only the space of two months. Yet, in MISTBORN, I let more time pass between sections and chapters.

I think, perhaps, newer authors are intimidated by plotting over such a longer stretch of time. Or, perhaps, it’s just something unconscious.

Either way, we’ve jumped in time—something necessary for this book, considering the amount that needs to be done in order for the job to get pulled off. This was one of my first clues that I couldn’t do a straight-up heist novel with MISTBORN. The book covers too much time, and too much has to happen before the ending can occur. I just didn’t feel that most of what the crew would be doing would be interesting to a reader, and I wanted to focus too much on Vin’s character growth to let me focus on the ‘heist’ of stealing the atium.


The fight in this chapter is what I consider the first true Allomantic battle of the series. This is what it’s supposed to feel like—there’s a reason I started with the concept of Vin feeling free. Allomantic battle is graceful, yet sharp. It is leaps through the mist and clever uses of Pushes and Pulls. This is what attracted me most to the magic system—not the logic of metals and the like, though I enjoy that. I loved the idea of mist, plus flying forms in fluttering mistcloaks.

I realize that it’s obvious, by the way, that Kelsier is her opponent. I didn’t write the chapter calling him ‘her opponent’ to be surprising. I just thought that by de-emphasizing Kelsier, I could better create an illusion of tension. The idea is that Vin herself isn’t thinking of him as Kelsier. Just as an opponent.


I’d just like to point out that Sazed heard Kelsier approaching before Vin did. That should mean something to you. This is also the first time we get Vin wanting to ignore Reen’s voice in her head. That is, in my way, an acknowledgement to the progress she’s achieved during the last few months.


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