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Annotation Mistborn 2 Chapter Twenty-Eight


The following is commentary, written by Brandon, about one of the chapters of MISTBORN: THE WELL OF ASCENSION. If you haven’t read this book, know that the following will contain major spoilers. We suggest reading the sample chapters from book one instead. You can also go to this book’s introduction or go to the main annotations page to access all annotations for all books. For those who have read some of MISTBORN 2, any spoilers for the ending of this book will be hidden, so as long as you’ve read up to this chapter, you should be all right.


Chapter Twenty-Eight

Elend and Vin discuss his loss of the throne

Elend is going to be tested. That’s one of the things I wanted to do with this book. In my previous two novels–Elantris and Mistborn–I gave the heroes relatively easy times. Or, well. . .maybe not easy. However, the fact remains that when they stayed true to their ideals, the things they tried tended to be successful.

I want to show that ideals can be a hindrance. That isn’t a reason not to have them, but it is an aspect of trying to do the things Elend is. There are a lot of people out there who will take advantage of a person who tries to do the right thing, and that can make doing the right thing the more difficult choice a lot of the time.

I also like how Elend is progressing as a leader, but I made certain to give a throwback to the old Elend in this chapter so that you’d know he was still there. Vin’s observations about this point are quite accurate.


Vin and OreSeur

Another thing that’s going well is the Vin-OreSeur relationship. In fact, because of some of the wedges Zane is driving between Elend and Vin, one of my alpha readers continually joked that he thought Vin and her dog had a better relationship than Vin and her boyfriend.

I don’t think that’s true–he was reading the book one chapter a week as I workshopped them. I hope, given Vin and Elend’s closeness at the beginning of the book, that you can see they still love each other–even if they are under a great deal of stress. That isn’t to say that Vin isn’t falling for Zane a bit. However, I don’t think she’s falling out of love with Elend so much as convincing herself that she’s no good for him.


Tindwyl Confronts Elend about Vin

Tindwyl’s parting words–that Elend might have to choose between Vin and his work–were tough to write. Not because they’re true, but because they’re a bit clichéd. In the end, I had to admit that I think Tindwyl would bring up this point, and would see it as her duty to make certain Elend thought about these things. So, I had her say these thigns anyway.


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