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Annotation Mistborn Chapter Three


The following is an author’s annotation that relates to a specific chapter of the book MISTBORN: THE FINAL EMPIRE. Note that the following is NOT the text of the actual chapter, but a companion to the chapter, revealing “behind the scenes” information. If you have not read the book up to–and including–this chapter, you risk serious spoilers! Please, if you haven’t read MISTBORN, go visit the sample chapters, or perhaps purchase the book via Amazon.

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Chapter Three

So, Kelsier is very interesting to me as a character. Mostly because of what we see in this chapter. He is a man of dichotomy, which is one of the themes of this novel. On one hand, he’s the joking, lighthearted man you see in the second half of the chapter. On the other hand, however, he’s a very dangerous, even ruthless, man. He laughs at himself in this chapter, but he wasn’t faking when he acted the way he did. There is an edge to Kelsier I’ve never built into a hero before. Sometimes, he makes me uncomfortable.


An item of note his in this chapter bump. I mention ‘Terris’ for the first time here, which I was glad that I was able to do. Remember that name, because you’ll soon get a lot more about that country.

I do worry that the bumps will make the book feel a little too much like a standard fantasy. Mention of prophesies and the like has become such a cliché in fantasy that I avoid them whenever I can. The story in MISTBORN doesn’t really deal much with that aspect of the history, but the story that is happening in the bumps has quite a bit to do with it.


In MISTBORN PRIME, there were no such thing as Mistings. Allomancy’s practitioners were called Mistborn, and they could use all of the various abilities, depending on which metal they ingested.

When I started work on this incarnation of the book, however, I felt that I wanted to involve a specialized team of Allomancers. That meant including people who were really good at one specific thing, but who couldn’t do other things. It’s a staple of the heist genre–you want specialists. So, I split up Allomancy, allowing lesser Allomancers to exist. These people, who only could do one of the many Allomantic powers, would be very good at the one thing they do. And, since Mistborn were so rare, you couldn’t really make an entire team of them. You’d be lucky to even get one. (Though Kelsier’s team just got a second one.)

Soon, you’ll get to meet the rest of the crew, and will be able to see how I split up Allomancy. One thing of interest, however, is that there was no emotional Allomancy in MISTBORN PRIME. I added Soothing and Rioting–the ability to make people less or more emotional–into this book because I felt I needed something that would be more. . .sneaky. These are skills that don’t relate to fighting, and I think they’d be very helpful for the sort of political intrigue I want to do in this book.


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