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Annotation Mistborn Chapter Thirty-Seven Part Thre


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Mistborn Chapter Thirty-Seven Part Three

The following is a journal entry I wrote regarding this chapter three years ago. It’s kind of fun that I finished it almost three years to the day from when I’m posting the annotation.

Chapter Thirty-Seven
Finished 5-22-04

Okay, so Vin’s running around in her skivvies again. There are a couple of legitimate reasons for this. First off, I figured that if I had an Allomancer captured, the first thing I would do would be to strip them completely. A little bit of metal can go a long way, and you don’t want to miss any. Now, this isn’t as big a deal for the Inquisitors, who can use Allomancy themselves to see sources of metal a person might be hiding on their body. However, I still think it would be standard procedure to take away the prisoner’s clothing. I toyed–briefly–with having Vin be naked in this chapter. I decided I just didn’t want to deal with that. Having an adult man get stripped and thrown in a cell is a bit different from doing the same thing to a young girl, I think.

So, this chapter is Vin’s character climax. Here’s where she finally realizes that part of trusting people is being trustworthy yourself–or, more importantly, part of not being abandoned is not abandoning your friends. Her choosing to stay with Sazed, followed by Elend’s appearance, are very important events for Vin. Her decision is a fulfillment of her story-long character arc, which has transformed her form a jumpy, frightened, untrusting person into one that would stay behind with a friend she loves, even though she knows that she might be killed. Her reward, then, for this bravery is Elend’s return–and the realization that there are people out there who love her enough to risk their lives for her. Her statement ‘You came back’ to Elend is perhaps the most important line Vin gets to say in the book.

Her decision to go and fight the Lord Ruler is secondary to these things, I think–which is probably why this decision doesn’t seem quite as well-founded as her decision to stay with Sazed. Still, the story has been pushing for a face-off between her and the Lord Ruler ever since Kelsier died, so I think that it works narratively.

I really want to get that final chapter written, but I have writing group in an hour, and I still haven’t read one of the submissions. It looks like Vin & co. are going to have to wait until Monday to have their final climax. I don’t expect it to be a long chapter–which is good, since I REALLY need to get to work on the ELANTRIS rewrite. . . .


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