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This is another of my favorite chapters. (How many of those am I allowed to have, by the way?)
Anyway, it was about time for someone to say the things that Vin did in this chapter. Kelsier and his group really ARE a bit disconnected from regular skaa. In a way, they’re like Elend and his little band of philosophers–they feel bad for those beneath them, and talk about helping, but it’s really hard for them to really understand the skaa.
I love Vin’s entrance. Perhaps I have a flare for melodrama, but I think it worked very well here to have her burst in, bloodied, carrying her dress. (Which, of course, she went back and fetched so that it wouldn’t give her away.)
I did change the last line of this scene. Up until the copy edit, the last line from Kelsier’s viewpoint (before we switch to Vin atop the roof) was him thinking “Well, she certainly has changed!”
This seemed like too much of a quip, and it undermined the tension and emotions of the last chapter. Sometimes, a good one-liner is good to release tension. However, in this case, I found that it really did feel out of place. This just wasn’t the time for some half-snarky comment from Kelsier.
Another big step for Vin is admitting that she loved Reen. She’s finally letting herself feel, and admit, the things that she’s been repressing all this time. It’s good for her to get them out, even if they hurt.
Of course, we also get to see Vin’s abandonment complex. It’s something that I haven’t enforced too much in the book, but it was always there. Often, I think a sense of forced independence and solitude–like the one attitude Vin displayed in the early parts of the book–comes from believing that everyone will leave you eventually.
Finally, we discuss Vin’s ability to pierce copperclouds. There’s actually something very strange going on here, but I can’t tell you what it is until book three. Suffice it to say that there is an in-world, magic-related explanation for why Vin can do this while Kelseir cannot.