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Annotation Mistborn 2 Chapter Twenty-Two


Chapter Twenty-Two

Vin spies on Ham in the Mists

This chapter has another poetic introduction–I warned you about those, I believe. I hope it isn’t too out of place.

Testing Ham in this way is something Vin really should have done earlier in the book. The problem is, I have a lot of things I need to pack into a relatively short space of time in this book. I did things in order of importance, and–oddly–testing the crewmembers took a lower precedent than getting Allrianne into the city or introducing Elend’s plan to deal with the warlords.

But, finally, we get to work a little bit on the impostor plot. There are dozens of ways that Vin could have gotten Ham to burn pewter–but she wanted to do one where he didn’t know she was there and he where he would use the metal reflexively. She also wanted to do it when she knew he was alone. That way, she couldn’t be fooled by someone burning pewter nearby to make it seem like Ham was burning.


Vin asks Ham how to kill a man burning Atium

This conversation about how to kill someone who is burning atium is another one I’d been wanting to include for a long time. It’s important to the plot, and the overall arc of the book, that you worry about Vin lack of atium. Plus, I want to keep the reader thinking about the metal, as the Lord Ruler’s atium cache is such a large part of the series’ plotting.

It’s tough to know how to fight someone who can see the future. What Ham outlines here are pretty much the only things that anyone has been able to come up with.


Vin admits her real reason for disliking OreSeur.

Obviously, the most important events in this chapter deal with Vin and OreSeur and their relationship. The real reason why she hates him is something that I hope you’ve been wondering about. I intended the “He ate Kelsier” argument to fall flat for readers. Vin’s smarter than that, as OreSeur said. Eating Kelsier’s dead body is a little, dumb thing. A person who grew up on the street wouldn’t be bothered by such a simple, if brutal, event–particularly not for as long as Vin has kept her grudge against OreSeur.

So this is why. She did love Kelsier–not romantically, perhaps, though Vin’s emotions at the time weren’t as simple as she’d now like to think. Either way, Kelsier’s death affected her greatly. Focusing on OreSeur–who knew about Kelsier’s real plan, but didn’t stop him from executing it–gave her someone to hate. She couldn’t hate Kelsier, but she could resent the one who had let him die.

It’s a complicated relationship. But, then, aren’t most relationships complicated?


Vin thinks about assassinating Cett and Straff

The other thing of real importance here is Vin’s struggling with whether or not she should just go assassinate her enemies. It seems like such a brutal, effective way to get rid of these armies. I wonder how many more leaders we’d find dead in our world if magical warriors like Mistborn existed.

Explaining why Vin doesn’t just go and take care of those two men was challenging for me. This is a harsher world than I’ve written in before, and it was really tempting to have Vin just go kill her enemies. I toyed with doing that very thing for a long time.

The problem is, I think it would be a bad idea for her to do that. I think it for the very reasons I outline here. I doubt that killing those two men would really have the effect she wanted. And, if she really were determined to drive those armies away, she’d have to kill quite a number of leaders. It seems equally likely to me that, after killing a number of them, the armies might just join forces and take the city.


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